You are writing great articles, but is your topic over this head?

19 05 2007

Have you ever been to a website trying to understand a concept, and the writer is writing about it and you are left MORE confused than when you started?  I don’t mind a word here or there that I can easily look up, but if the article is about a concept……don’t go over my head okay?  LOL! 

At times its hard to realize that maybe POSSIBLY alot of your readers aren’t as advantaged on a topic as you are!  Could be why they are there!  They want to learn!  If you are going to chat about some concept – stop to think about the newbies at times!   

It just happened again.

I’m reading, but I’m not getting it. Maybe if I continue to read, all will become clear.


I feel dumb.

Obviously, there is something I’m missing. It’s my fault. I’ll read it again.

Nope, still not getting it.

The pictures look great, nice web design. Looks like a trustworthy company.

Keep your money, Chris. Maybe somebody can explain it to me later (if I remember).

Sorry friend, you’ve just lost the sale.

Don’t let that happen to you!!

Writing copy even Grandma would love! is a good article from The Copy Blogger.

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Hips – Around Bottom of Zipper 54
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Staining no
Fading no
Fraying no
Other n/a




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